Where to start.......ok, what editing software are you using?... Most shots are washed out, scenes are too long, shots of the camera tilting or panning too quickly are not good. What are you showing or presenting? Too many high shots, mix it up a bit. Cut out the "unsmooth" camera movements, but most importantly... keep trying and practicing in post edit. My first try's were crap,(many will say they still are lol).. but you will get better and better with an observant eye, and a lot of trial and error.. look at pro work, and try to recreate it with your own artistic touch. No offense Bud, just trying to give you some advice. I watch franchise grade commercials to get ideas.. It just takes time and work, keep it up man. Remember, Carol Shelby's first build prob ran like ****.
